These Feelings Lost Poem by nick feiner

These Feelings Lost

Rating: 5.0


With the consumption of anger,
Along with the pain,
Life seems so empty,
So void and drain,

Though Yes, it is Decent,
No problems of recent,
Still i feel numb,

Rage hiding, out of sight,
The self pity held in tight,
My walls fortified,
You could not breach them if you tried.

Surrender is immanent,
But you hold to your commitment,
That is Love,

Love worth the lasting pain,
Love worth the forever drain,
I long for this once again,

A light in the dark,
Someone who will leave a mark,
I wish for someone who will last forever,
Someone i will leave Never.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramesh Rai 03 July 2012

BRILLIANT POEM. KEEP IT UP

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