They! ! Poem by harminder kour

They! !

Rating: 4.3


THEY wished my coming to the edge,
I feared the height.

THEY wished my coming to the edge,
I feared that they might fall.

They wished my coming to the edge,
I feared for their life.

With a positive heart,
I came to the edge,

they pushed and they flew.........

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 02 November 2017

A refined poetic imagination, Harminder. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Harminder Kour 14 April 2012

thnanks a lot for your appreciation @ vijay sai r

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Vijay Sai R 14 April 2012

nice...thinking poem...well done

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