Think Of Other People Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Think Of Other People

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I love to write more
Especially poems and prayers
I find enormous joy
When people read and enjoy

It had never been my hobby
But I used to watch and feel happy
Bird’s movement made me to think
Flowers appealed me with color pink

I loved beautiful and smiling faces
Their white skin and glorious race
Some of the people are really natural
Their chicks are pink rose and look beautiful

There are many more objects
They are directly liked by their acts
Take example of rose and its show
The wind too is influenced to carry fragrance and blow

I was soldier and pace loving human being
The tough past is left behind to see and sing
Military life taught me to be tolerant
Hear with patience and live in present

I am not gifted writer
But write with smile and humor
Touch with human feeling and true love
I love good faces and strongly believe

Why not enjoy life when it invites?
With open arms to ignite wishes
It is our duty to fulfill desire
Think of other people and admire

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 September 2013

I love to write more Especially poems and prayers

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 September 2013

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 September 2013

Summary of your poem David Baety2 minutes ago Great work. It is filled with imagery and rhythm. Very attractive! Comment +1 nice

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 September 2013

Demetrio Najera2 minutes ago you have talent bro dont doubt yourself :)

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 September 2013

A good poem Tim MurrayLess than a minute ago Tolerance is a wonderful topic to write about. The message is clear and simple. The poem reads well. A minor typo, I think. The first line of the fifth stanza reads I was a soldier and PACE loving... Did you mean peace? Good poem. I hope to read more in the future. Comment +1 I LIKE IT

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 September 2013

Pat Butler2 minutes ago GOOD FLOW

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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