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David Cadywold

Rookie - 10 Points (1966 / Darlington)


Cant keep thinking this way
It makes me depressed everyday
The tablets I take dont seem to work
Cos right on the edge of my concious it lurks

Gloomy black clouds hanging around
Making me tired, bringing me down
When it looks like Im lightening up
Something else happens and messes it up

Ive had enough of feeling this way
Time to change my thoughts positively I say
Cheer up, have a laugh and smile at the world
No more feeling down beyond a joke its obsurd

Submitted: Friday, October 26, 2012
Edited: Wednesday, November 21, 2012

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Fed up of feeling bad all the time

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  • Rookie - 28 Points Craig Anderson (10/30/2012 11:20:00 AM)

    It will change my friend. Take your time small steps plus meds will shake you up then down then up you know what I mean. Brilliant piece of inner turmoil. Thanks for sharing.
    Best regards.
    Craig (Report) Reply

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