Third Times A Charm? Poem by lyle hertenstein

Third Times A Charm?

Rating: 4.8


I see all I need in those eyes
I swear my love
Ill tell no lie

Its true, opposites attract
When im with you im drowning in fire
And burning in water
How could there ever be someone so different
Yet so perfect for me
Pefect to see
Perfect to say
That's her
My world

Just hearing you say my name
Makes it hard to breathe
I lay down to dream
About the last breath with you

Just seeing you smile
Makes my heart stop
flatline
Your smile is oh so divine
Oh how I love what you do to my heart

I wish I could know what you are thinking
Knowing all you believe in
Do you believe me
Do you like what you see

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alayna Bullock 02 November 2008

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Jess Spacy 28 October 2008

maybe 3rd time is a charm? ? idkk: / but this is amazingg, i love it so muchh,

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BEAU GOLDEN 27 October 2008

very passionate piece about love. well done.

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