BurningDesire PhekoMotaung

Veteran Poet - 1,492 Points (Reitz.Republic Of South Africa)

This Evening You'Re Sizzling At Your Royal Most Sensational In Mystic Purple - Poem by BurningDesire PhekoMotaung

Today amidst the mist
Just after dusk way after
The in-betweeners have done
Done their thrill seeker's
Star studded moon dance look
This evening you're at your
Royal most sensational in
Mystic purple.The stimulation
Of red and the calm of blue
Seem to be vying for your
Attention.But the artistry of
The beauty of your uplifting
Purple takes the characteristic
Undertones to uplift the dormant
Soul and calms the lover's
Mind and nerves and offers
A sense of spirituality but
Most of all your purple is
Appreciated by the eccentric
You encourage my creativity


Comments about This Evening You'Re Sizzling At Your Royal Most Sensational In Mystic Purple by BurningDesire PhekoMotaung

  • Rookie - 44 Points Nontobeko Dlamini (5/26/2012 1:40:00 AM)

    perfect in every way, word choice is appropriate and uncontrived, economical and energizing too. It just pushes the poem along. purple a beautiful colour (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 213 Points Siyabonga A Nxumalo (5/25/2012 4:11:00 AM)

    Mmmh! man, well crafted and perfect flow.I enjoyed reading this sweet poem of yours...

    Siya_! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 24, 2012



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