This Train Of The Dawn Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul
This Train Of The Dawn
Piercing into the abode of golden clouds,
Getting gentle rays of hidden sun in sky,
On both of iron tracks this train is running,
Its journey is towards heaven of course.
Passengers are pilgrims inside this train,
This train is moving forward for light,
Back red light is glowing in new perception,
Merciful light rays are falling on train.
Aliens riding horses in this golden horizon,
They are competing with train to reach soon,
To enter into the gateway of the heaven,
For gaining wisdom they are very fast.
This train of the dawn is blowing horn of love,
Dawn has given rise the golden light in clouds,
Clear autumn's dawn wears the jewellery,
Dawn's beautiful train is in journey of eternity.
© Kumarmani Mahakul,17 September 2017. All rights reserved.
Dawn's train is getting breeze of journey. Greatest happiness we get remaining with God. We search for eternal happiness and we get this. God teaches us righteousness. Thank you very much for sharing this. You are a nice poet. This poem is excellent poem.
A tremendous extended metaphor of the train journeying to heaven, with passengers who are pilgrims. A visionary poem.
Golden horizon! ! ! With the muse of nature! Thanks for sharing.
A beautiful metaphor! Our life on Earth is a train journey and we are headed for eternity! Here we are not merely travelers or tourists set out for sight seeing, but pilgrims! Great piece!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Rightly I read and feel the scene of train passing through city's heart as you have shown in picture. I love such train poems.