gershon hepner

Rookie - 10 Points (5 3 38 / leipzig)

Thong - Poem by gershon hepner

Of almost bare, the derriere
of women wearing underwear
that covers little, I would sing,
and thongs that are designed to cling
to buttocks closer than a panty,
no longer scandalous though scanty.

As with impunity I peek,
I glimpse the glory of a cheek
that's framed by threads that grace the groin
and turn it into tenderloin,
for less is more and life is merrier
when thin lines hemisect the derriere.

6/8/99


Comments about Thong by gershon hepner

  • Rookie - 313 Points Adryan Rotica (11/12/2005 9:17:00 PM)

    Very cheeky Gershon~ Loved the rhythm and enthusiasm........! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 7 Points Max Reif (7/21/2005 9:28:00 PM)

    Those are really clever rhymes.
    Ogden Nash would approve
    (he who wrote, 'The one-L lama, he's a priest,
    The two-L llama, he's a beast,
    And I would bet a silk pajama,
    There isn't any 3-l lllama.') I think yours is better! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kathleen Paul-Flanagan (7/21/2005 3:10:00 PM)

    I'm still laughing! Clever stuff! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rev. Dr. A. Jacob Hassler (7/21/2005 2:16:00 PM)

    ha ha ha! i love this! very clever and well said!

    Jake (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 21, 2005



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