gershon hepner

Rookie - 10 Points (5 3 38 / leipzig)

Thong - Poem by gershon hepner

Of almost bare, the derriere
of women wearing underwear
that covers little, I would sing,
and thongs that are designed to cling
to buttocks closer than a panty,
no longer scandalous though scanty.

As with impunity I peek,
I glimpse the glory of a cheek
that's framed by threads that grace the groin
and turn it into tenderloin,
for less is more and life is merrier
when thin lines hemisect the derriere.


Comments about Thong by gershon hepner

  • Rookie - 313 Points Adryan Rotica (11/12/2005 9:17:00 PM)

    Very cheeky Gershon~ Loved the rhythm and enthusiasm........! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 7 Points Max Reif (7/21/2005 9:28:00 PM)

    Those are really clever rhymes.
    Ogden Nash would approve
    (he who wrote, 'The one-L lama, he's a priest,
    The two-L llama, he's a beast,
    And I would bet a silk pajama,
    There isn't any 3-l lllama.') I think yours is better! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kathleen Paul-Flanagan (7/21/2005 3:10:00 PM)

    I'm still laughing! Clever stuff! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rev. Dr. A. Jacob Hassler (7/21/2005 2:16:00 PM)

    ha ha ha! i love this! very clever and well said!

    Jake (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 21, 2005

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