Seema Aarella

Rookie - 10 Points (19 Mar 1979 / KGF, India)

! ! ! ...Those Flowers - Poem by Seema Aarella

They lie there, on the chipped slab
Where no one sniffs its smell
Its beauty does not rouse a talk
Since the dead can’t see and tell

Thronging the shrine of sacred stone
Each element in service of him
Endorsed with holiness unknown
They gleam with a hallowed vim

Laid with care, designed to excite
Gracing the boudoir of newly wed
Squashed, squeezed through the night
While a life begins, they are dead.


Comments about ! ! ! ...Those Flowers by Seema Aarella

  • Rookie - 87 Points Kesav Easwaran (10/27/2009 5:12:00 AM)

    nice concept for a poem...presented beautifully, Seema...thanks...10 (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Raj Nandy (10/26/2009 9:58:00 AM)

    IT IS TRUE THAT WE EXPRESS OUR INNER FEELINGS WITH PERISHABLE FLOWERS, THOUGH WE HUMANS SURVIVE FOR LONGER HOURS!
    LET THE BOUQUET OF FEELINGS REMAIN IN OUR HEARTS AND MIND, -
    GIVING THEM A TOUCH OF THE DIVINE!
    -Raj Nandy (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 96 Points Vidyadhara ..... (9/4/2009 2:36:00 AM)

    Flowery words depicting truth of life and its irony....... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 71 Points Indira Babbellapati (9/3/2009 11:31:00 PM)

    enough to convey crude human greed! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,462 Points Marieta Maglas (9/2/2009 9:57:00 AM)

    excellent poem, very well written, thank you for sharing...............10+++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nikunj Sharma (8/29/2009 1:08:00 AM)

    Nicely rhymed and written with lot of poetic fragrence........the poem is as graceful as the flowers themselves are. true they give their lives for the pleasures of we the people (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vaibhav Pandey (8/26/2009 3:02:00 AM)

    'While a life begins, they are dead.'......a brilliant ending to this very fine poem ma'm.....truly loved it...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Reshma Ramesh (8/25/2009 12:15:00 PM)

    hmmm flowers for every occasion.....well observed seema and well penned.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sarwar Chowdhury (8/24/2009 7:15:00 AM)

    remarkable piece! beautifully disclosed the fact!
    10+ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 42 Points Obinna Eruchie (8/22/2009 7:10:00 AM)

    Beautiful life sprung from the dead. This is a wonderful poem, Seema. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rakesh Bedi (8/21/2009 9:30:00 AM)

    ....While a life begins they are dead, correct seema and their life makes the others life Unforgettable! The fragrance gifted to the momemts stays fresh in the memory till last. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Samanyan Lakshminarayanan (8/21/2009 6:49:00 AM)

    even after death....lovely i just wrote a senryu inspired by this poem...'a garland' (Report) Reply

  • Rookie rago rago (8/21/2009 6:30:00 AM)

    interesting........... still fragrance spread........... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 21, 2009

Poem Edited: Tuesday, October 27, 2009


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