hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 67,038 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Till End - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

Lazy lines
Undermine
Spirit to feel fine

Each day
Has its importance
To show the way

Whole of the week
May take course to speak
Finally to feel strong or weak

Not days alone
But hours gone too
Should be counted as one

Minutes and seconds
Make them real friends
Near and dear till end


Comments about Till End by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 67,038 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/12/2013 5:09:00 PM)

    VERY GOOD


    Shelia WhiteLess than a minute ago
    OKAY KNOW
    Comment +1
    nice (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 67,038 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/12/2013 5:09:00 PM)

    nature loverLess than a minute ago
    nice poem on time and its value, liked it (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 67,038 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/12/2013 5:07:00 PM)

    Lazy lines
    Undermine
    Spirit to feel fine (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 12, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, August 26, 2013


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