A solar flare,
Time sizzles
On contact with human consciousness
Then disappears
Into the blue beyond
You have combined the universal with the human poetically and economically in this awesome piece which takes the reader into a a personalized cosmos, rather like Gustav Holtz in his The Planets. Love 'time sizzles' in particular. Great poem. love, Allie xxxx
Very powerful and evocative. Wishing you strength for the journey, my poet friend. As always, Sandra
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I take these five lines as a beautifully expressed philosophical summary of my long poem, 'Visions of the vast blue empyrean'! Thanks! -Raj Nandy