Time's Tell Poem by Eric The Viking

Time's Tell



Time, flowing by and by
With sweat from the brow
And aging of the vine
As time passes by feverishly
Or churning
From seed to flower
Blooming
A creek run dry
Or stream of the Nile
Altered by minute and hour

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adeline Foster 08 July 2011

Now that is a well turned poem. There are no extraneous words to tangle the senses. Try mine – Frustrated Plans - Adeline

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