Time To Go Poem by Rebecca Pepper

Time To Go



Tears race through my veins
As my sorrow takes the reins
There's nothing more to say
Than a sweet goodbye today

Don't whisper another darkened word
I am struggling to keep these sobs unheard
So don't look into my broken eyes
I don't want you to see these tears I've cried

I knew that this day would come
And nobody can say that the past hasn't been fun
But I can't believe it's finally happening to me
I have a feeling I'm going to look vulnerable for everyone to see

So don't look between the lines, I'm fine
So what if I don't feel safe, like I'm out of time
I know that once this feeling has passed
I can truly let go, be free at last

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Last proper day at school and I wrote this in lesson to try and stop myself from crying because I'm all good and emotionally problematic like that :)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gautham Longman 17 May 2012

The way you mix the rhyme and rhythm into your feelings is really good Rebecca... Loved the lines

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