To Be A Bird Poem by Jennifer Birchall

To Be A Bird

Rating: 5.0


I wish to be a bird for a day
For the wind to take me into nothingness
Feel weightless from the load I carry
I'd go where the sun was shining
To warm the coldness in my heart
Somewhere far away from all the pain
Fly free just for a day

Friday, March 15, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: bird,feelings,flying,free,sun,thoughts
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C F 19 March 2019

Fly free just for a day... a beautiful but deeply sad poem. Somehow, I can sense an even deeper sadness beyond the words you have written. A 10 and to my favorites.

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Sekharan Pookkat 18 March 2019

be a bird to cross the earth and moon sun and galaxies and down to our den satisfying our inner soul is a nice idea, a dream of every poet! take off your imaginary journey- my wishes

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 17 March 2019

a beautiful poem in few great lines. loved to read it.

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Amir Marandi 16 March 2019

Wishing you sunny days to put warmth in your heart and washing off the cold and darkness from your life.

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Julia Luber 15 March 2019

I can't imagine that if I loved it, I could be a bird for just one day but like this poem return to it whenever I want. Come back and then do it again. Great subject. Something I often think about.

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Jennifer Birchall

Jennifer Birchall

Cheshire, England
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