Treasure Island

Ramdas Surianarayanan

(April 11,1989 / Thrissur)

TO MY LOVE...............

Here I am, half dead
Neither feeling pain,
Nor using brain.
Spilling blood from a cut
Made me aware
That I am alive.

Thanks dear! ! ! !
For teaching me the lesson,
That love is like Cocaine.
That much addicted was I
But for You,
I was just one of them.

Hallucinating it was,
And the paranoidal delusions I had,
As I sniffed and sniffed
The drug you gave.
It shook me up
And turned me on.

And now you left me all alone;
I’m anxious and restless
Empty mind and heavy heart
Broken nerves and weak legs
Truly addicted I am,
To the killer drug called LOVE.

Never come to my life,
Ever again,
And addict me with love.
Alive I am now, half dead;
Never can I bear the pain
Never can I come back to life again.......

Submitted: Thursday, July 28, 2011
Edited: Thursday, July 28, 2011

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  • Unwritten Soul (11/23/2012 10:38:00 AM)

    The bitter is the flavor of this poem, it really left a taste in heart by each stanza you created here, a poignant write..absolutely a nice telling mind to paper..keep it up_Soul (Report) Reply

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