To Relive Those Special Moments Poem by M. Asim Nehal

To Relive Those Special Moments

Rating: 5.0


Will you come with me tonight
To that old pond?
Where we sat under the moonbeam
Hand in hand and eyes locked together
And the night passed in total silence
Where the dew covered our shyness
And our frozen heart melted
And flowed from the mountain
And to take the wings
And flew away, leaving our body
To explore the beauty of this life
And the pains, sorrow passed under the bridge
As we reached the constellation of the stars
To glide down to the pond again.

Monday, December 7, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love and dreams
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Suzon Albert 08 December 2020

A path every lover wish to take. Past is glorious when we have someone special.

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Kostas Lagos 08 December 2020

Romantic and beautiful. Love this poem

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Anjandev Roy 08 December 2020

Superb piece......thank u, dear friend......anjandev roy.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 December 2020

A lovely moment of the past has been so touchingly delineated here in this poem. Let me cite - Where we sat under the moonbeam / Hand in hand and eyes locked together / And the night passed in total silence / Where the dew covered our shyness. Such a beautiful poem. Five stars.

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 December 2020

Pains and sorrows of love and life! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Jagdish Singh Ramana 31 December 2020

Intense expression reflecting life.

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Rajnish Manga 31 December 2020

That's another poem on meeting at night. It is so animated that the reader has no way to remain only a reader or a passive entity. Thanks, Asim ji. Great energy poured in to the words.

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Pallab Chaudhury 18 December 2020

Nicely painted with romantic fabrics.... Thank you for the poem being shared.

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Varsha M 13 December 2020

Nicely penned into beautiful imaginative world. Thank-you.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 December 2020

To relive romantic love moments, WOW! Magical words here memorized by a romantic poet. I have enjoyed totally those moments, thank you for composing.5 Stars!

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