To Smoke Poem by Rob Knetsch

To Smoke



give me
give me give me
gimme gimme gimme
gimme gimme gimme please give me

is it lit? is it burning?
give it
give it here
give it to me

aaaahhhhh
the first one
the first the smoke
the taste
so good

thank you
oh thank you
thank you for this cigarette
this cigarette so good
tastes so good
feels so good

so good, i need more
more and more
without more
i seem like dying

give me more


"to smoke" © 2013 Rob Knetsch

Monday, December 18, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: addiction,dependence,dying,smoking
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rob Knetsch 18 December 2017

My response to some of the comments i received related to this poem: This isn't about me. I have never smoked in my life. This is written from the perspective of a smoker: about the addiction, the need, the dependency, and the non-awareness. And about being a mere slave.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 18 December 2017

SECOND and LAST PART Almost a whole family the lives have been ruined in a cruellest way: Cancer of the lungs. My grandpa died at a very old age despite his fervent smoking, BUT this is exceptional, you can count your fingers on ONE hand how many they ARE IN REALITY. A brilliant poem about the eddicted chain-smoker. Truly saddest, but when already this far, he/she is helpless.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 January 2018

Eror: A brilliant poem about the addicted chain-smoker. The word must be addicted and not as in above sentence. Thank you.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 18 December 2017

FIRST PART Smoking is dying in a terrible way. You won't say, but smoking costs your life. It IS dangerous, but because of the great addiction, the smoker does not feel anything else than to the wish to smoke one cigarette. Before he/she knows he/she is smoking many many packs full of cigarettes.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 18 December 2017

Rob, smoking is dangerous to your health👍👍👍

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