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Today

Today i took a deap breath
Filled my lungs with air
Today i looked around
But no one was there
Today i walked alone
Looking for a hand
Today i watched the sun
Smothering the ground
Today i wondered what if
the ground was me
Today i wondered
What its like to be a tree
Today i was thinking
Of the tears that i shed
Today i said
Thats it its now laid to rest

Submitted: Tuesday, January 03, 2012
Edited: Wednesday, January 04, 2012

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  • Smoky Hoss (1/4/2012 3:12:00 PM)

    This is great; filled with pathos and an ardor of fine mystery. I love it.

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