Tonight, Without You Poem by Lorenzo Costigliolo

Tonight, Without You

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When you are there
and I am here,
deep sadness overwhelms me,
crushing blanket of despair.

While I am here,
and you are there,
I look for you
not knowing why
deep sadness overwhelms me
across vast caverns, empty air,
dreadful, wide expanse of space
it seems a lightyear to your face.

When we are neither here nor there,
two bodies in one soul we share;
your light in dark by day grows dim
as stars do when bright dawn ascends
with morning dew and heated sun
absorbing every pore of you
into itself as ice and snow
with waters from high glaciers do.

When both our paths do intersect,
that point they cross becomes as one
in body, soul, nor be undone
by any force that Nature gives,
while in ourselves, where feelings run
too deep, alas, sweet Eros lives.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patti Masterman 31 October 2009

I can't get this poem out of my head (but then, who would want such a thing to ever leave?) (smile)

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Patti Masterman 29 October 2009

This is such an eloquent yet subdued thing. It's as if Mozart were reborn with the ability to write instead of compose, and his words were filled with the complete silence that once lived only between the notes of a song, but he captured every nuance between every word so it was not lost but was able to speak, to sing of things rarely spoken of; nobody had the skill to put words to it..and yet you do.

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