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Towards the ultimate goal

River gurgles

Surges ahead

With sparkling silver

Towards the sea:

The ultimate destination.



Mountain becomes jealous

Stands in front

aloft

Like a giant obstacle.



The river smiles

Takes a detour,

Agile.

Surrounds the mountain

Forming a lake around.

And goes ahead.



The mountain feel s ashamed

As the river salutes

With smile.

And says,

‘But for you

A blue lake forms

For the mankind

to feel soothed.’



Sorry river, says the mountain

‘I’m ashamed,

Here I cast my ego

Express my gratitude

To your magnanimity.’



‘No, no, you’re great,

As obstacle you stand

With an orb of hope

Where I finds a way ahead.

My aim is sea.

The lake is for you

Without you

It’s nothing, ’

Says the river

And serpentines ahead.

With vigour

Dazzle

And focus.

Submitted: Wednesday, September 18, 2013
Edited: Friday, September 20, 2013


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  • Sudama Panigrahi (9/18/2013 12:28:00 PM)

    Thank you Aftab sir......

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  • Aftab Alam Khursheed (9/18/2013 12:21:00 PM)

    ultimate goal is the desire of all but here you compared between river and mountain and drag the reference that is beautiful this is the poetry dear and you did it thank you fantastic Sudam

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