Is this adage?
Double feelings at the same age
Your death became our adhensive
Who never to be expecting in passive
Is this resentful cryptically?
Are you going to name me tamer lady?
It was the destiny it has been written so
Which let some of us die and the rest of us go
Make me your representative
And I will act as i was the native
I want to asure you that I will take good care of him
To your previous lover but your in-law at the time
May your body rest at peace
Send us your prayer to the christ
Wish me a good husband and wish him a great wife
We all are yours since the previous life
N.B this is a real life story of one young lady
Hi Luwi - This is a perfect complement to part 1 - I love the sentiments. 'Your death became our ADHESIVE' 'It was the DESTINY' 'I will take good care of him' 'Wish me a good husband - Wish him a great wife'. Beautifully written I score it a MAX. Love in poetry - JOHN.
In this poem it sounds like nobody is leting you go And you feel like you dying every day. if you had or have a strict parent you know what I am talking about. They always seems to spunk you because they believe by spanking that you will learn better and will behave better. That is not true
The dead one may bless you or not but you have to lead this mortal life in all situations and with varied feelings. If you can do this, you may go ahead. What else can I say?
i love the way you wrote this poem and the words you picked were perfect the way they role of the tongue good write and i also think the fact that it is a true story as well
i love the way you wrote this poem and the words you picked were perfect the way they role of the tongue good write and i also think the fact that it is a true story as well
It was the destiny it has been written so Which let some of us die and the rest of us go Penetrating lines, well done poem
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
again very touching and with powerful emotions that flow all over the poem and there is no need to say that you wrote it with an excellent rhyme and that's very difficult sometimes because you have to keep your line of thought, not only it has to rhyme excellent job 10+++++