Transient Emotions (Senryu) Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

Transient Emotions (Senryu)

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seeing rival's joy
deep ache lacerates the heart—
empathy warms it

Sunday, January 17, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: emotions,empathy
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terry Craddock 17 January 2016

tsunami wave conflicting emotions, pain lacerating slices heart, watching rival's radiant joy, empathy warms the heart, rebirth regeneration seeds may grow

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 November 2018

This is a beautiful poem on imagination nicely constructed. thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 June 2016

Emotions are part of life! But, let us control ourselves to overcome hatred. Thanks for sharing.

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Terry Craddock 18 January 2016

Empathy Warms Stone Heart tsunami wave conflicting emotions pain lacerating slices heart watching rival's radiant joy empathy warms stone heart rebirth regeneration light seeds are grown Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Transient Emotions' by the poet Mihaela Pirjol. Dedicated to the poet Mihaela Pirjol

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Terry Craddock 18 January 2016

Lacerating Conflicting Emotion Pain tsunami wave conflicting emotions pain lacerating slices heart watching rival's radiant joy empathy sunrise warms withering heart rebirth regeneration seeds may blessing grow Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Transient Emotions' by the poet Mihaela Pirjol. Dedicated to the poet Mihaela Pirjol.

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Terry Craddock 18 January 2016

Watching Rival's Radiant Joys tsunami waves conflicting emotions pain lacerating slices rapture ruptured hearts watching rival's radiant joys empathy warms bleeding hearts hope rebirth regeneration seeds may grow in blessings good wishes Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Transient Emotions' by the poet Mihaela Pirjol. Dedicated to the poet Mihaela Pirjol.

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