Travelling Up To You Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Travelling Up To You

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Dear father of heaven
You know I am travelling
I am travelling up to you
To have a lovable touch.

I am soul you are my daddy
By your touch I shall get
New energy should speak up
I should understand life too.

My vision I spread so far
By your grace I write letter
I am travelling with ambition
I know you will welcome there.

Very fast mind is taking
Stability is gained in mind
Wind too does not able to be
In this competition I see.

Thursday, December 3, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life,spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 03 December 2015

Source of all light, source of all energy and source of all life is HE, The Almighty GOD....Very well written poem, as usual..100

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Darious Alexopoulos 17 October 2020

We have to move up to God because he can give us salvation. This poem is very interesting full of true wisdom.

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Michael Walker 17 July 2019

You express sound faith in God with the image of travelling.

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Dogma Daniman 19 February 2019

We love to travel towards father of Heaven with greater hope and beauty of dignity. This is an interesting spiritual poem that uplifts life's thrill.

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 December 2015

Life should give us hope and direction! Able to meet up the laws of peace. Nice work.

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Akhtar Jawad 03 December 2015

Life is a journey and destination is the heaven. Rest is a joy of a few moments. A nice poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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