Tri color may be furled tomorrow in the sky
We raise our head and try
Look! It is our national flag
Freedom is there and in bag
Yes, we have made progress
Clean roads are their with smooth surface
Yet we need to strive hard and chase
All our dreams that were not realized in some cases
We look towards stable nation
Cordial atmosphere with strong relation
We are seen with high hope
Our progress is constant and non stop
We lack many things
As new nation we may miss certain things
Yet some lapses are not to be forgotten
The basket is certainly having few eggs as rotten
What do we reiterate on this Independence Day?
Look towards leadership and shut the eyes any way?
No we need to improve and warn leaders
You may face same grave as ours
Millions starve for the want of food
Our crop is bumper and good
We can feed domestic people
As we as help those who are in trouble
We need warehouses and not stadiums
We need to balance with equilibrium
Grain should not rot in open
The situation should not slip out of hand and turn
Let freedom be seen in truest form
Let national wealth remain at home
Foreign help is necessary and welcome
Yet neighborhood should prove troublesome
Raise head with honor and assert
We shall be second to none in desert
We shall come up with green belt and make revolution
Country may witness real progress with firm resolution
Belinda Hutcheson well written 7 minutes ago · Unlike · 1
Matloob Bokhari great about a minute ago · Unlike · 1
''We shall come up with green belt and make revolution Country may witness real progress with firm resolution'' - amazing idea
Brad Smith Happy Independence Day to my friends overseas! !
Brian Bigelow Remember studying it, it could have been better thought out but they were in a hurry to get something done. Sometimes its better when the politicians get nothing done. a few seconds ago ·
Queeny Gona Hasmukh sir I wish the whole globe read this poem. Let us not repeat the mistakes of past 16 minutes ago via mobile · Like · 1
ichelle Marcak2 hours ago I like the concept... Comment +1 Good narration of Indian spirit
Vinod Passy2 hours ago I particularly like the lines We need warehouses and not stadiums We need to balance with equilibrium Grain should not rot in open Good work by Mr. Hasmukh Mehta The situation should not slip out of hand and turn Let freedom be seen in truest form Let national wealth remain at home Comment +1 decent
Elliott Knick2 hours ago political not really my thing but good write Comment +1 ok
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I would like to translate this poem
Tri color may be furled tomorrow in the sky We raise our head and try Look! It is our national flag Freedom is there and in bag