Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

Gold Star - 7,741 Points (July 12,1952 / New York City)

Trust - Poem by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

If trust could be as right as rain

then I could believe in promises again

If trust is faith in the great divine

behind the clouds the stars still shine

Topic(s) of this poem: trust


Comments about Trust by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

  • Ramesh Rai (9/15/2014 9:17:00 AM)


    Excellent beautiful write as if you have expressed in one breath. (Report) Reply

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  • Patricia Grantham (9/11/2014 7:31:00 AM)


    Trust is only a five letter word, but it still holds a
    lot of power. Without trust life would be fruitless.
    Good.
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  • (9/9/2014 9:25:00 AM)


    Short and sweet but such meaningful words. I love it. (Report) Reply

  • Adeline Foster (9/8/2014 11:37:00 PM)


    Yes, lovely, short, to the point poem. Read mine - When Love Dies -
    Adeline
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  • Tribhawan Kaul (9/8/2014 2:27:00 AM)


    Trust make us survive whether onc trusts divine or has trust in himself. Nice thoughtful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gajanan Mishra (9/7/2014 10:08:00 AM)


    great divine- trust, believe. I like it. (Report) Reply

  • (9/6/2014 5:02:00 PM)


    Nice poem but too short. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

    Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (9/13/2014 5:57:00 PM)

    The poem felt completed to me..I couldn't think of anymore lines to add to it.Sometimes a short poem will say more than a long poem.Haiku are very good examples of a universe of meanings in a nutshell..my poem isn't a haiku but it says alot in several different ways if you analyze it instead of taking it verbatim..thank you for your comment..

  • S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (9/5/2014 12:28:00 PM)


    Yes very true about faith. Kudos for the rhyming verse as well.
    Do pls review my latest poem too.
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  • Heather Wilkins (9/4/2014 8:34:00 PM)


    a nice short poem on trust. u-it is very hard to gain ones trust very easy to lose (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 4, 2014

Poem Edited: Friday, September 5, 2014


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