Treasure Island

Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

(July 12,1952 / New York City)

Trust


If trust could be as right as rain

then I could believe in promises again

If trust is faith in the great divine

behind the clouds the stars still shine

Submitted: Thursday, September 04, 2014
Edited: Friday, September 05, 2014

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  • Patricia Grantham (9/11/2014 7:31:00 AM)

    Trust is only a five letter word, but it still holds a
    lot of power. Without trust life would be fruitless.
    Good. (Report) Reply

  • Tribhawan Kaul (9/8/2014 2:27:00 AM)

    Trust make us survive whether onc trusts divine or has trust in himself. Nice thoughtful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Chinedu Dike (9/6/2014 5:02:00 PM)

    Nice poem but too short. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

    Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (9/13/2014 5:57:00 PM)

    The poem felt completed to me..I couldn't think of anymore lines to add to it.Sometimes a short poem will say more than a long poem.Haiku are very good examples of a universe of meanings in a nutshell..my poem isn't a haiku but it says alot in several different ways if you analyze it instead of taking it verbatim..thank you for your comment..

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