Trust-Dead Poem by Tears In Rain

Trust-Dead

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my friend, you pretend
you don't know
what limits are

and then, once again,
do you go
two steps too far

these sticks and stones
i had carried
for you i've given now
all i've got

bely what trust
we had shared
left these twin barrels
long since shot

two-faced you turned
your coats inside
and out so many
many times

by now i know
your grayish bones
your shady tones and
all your lines

i'd believed you
though bereft of you
so oft forgiven now
i forgot

thus i leave you
and i've left for you
not just a little no
but alot

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sinnaminsun Sinnaminsun 29 November 2005

T.I.R. your poem speaks of an obvious let-down, as one discovers the true colors of another. Neat poem :) Kim

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Mary Nagy 28 November 2005

A great poem of betrayal Tears. Very good poem. Sincerely, mary

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