Treasure Island

Laura Venter

(20th October 1995 / middleburg)

Trust is now untrusted...


i trusted you once before,
but now my heart is sore,
because i found out,
the truth always there,
that the truth, i cant trust anyone,
is a truth i cannot bear,
i cannot look at you the same anymore
because you betrayed me once more
and trust is given and recieved
and theres something i musnt have percieved,
but there is one thing for sure,
you were someone i shoundtve believed
never again wil i be fooled
by your sly lies and cowardly acts
because you know,
you cant hide the facts,
so just walk away
and dont look back
dont say sorry
i wont cut you slack
because you are now,
untrusted

Submitted: Thursday, June 18, 2009
Edited: Thursday, June 18, 2009

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  • Ashraful Musaddeq (6/18/2009 11:41:00 AM)

    'and dont look back
    dont say sorry
    i wont cut you slack
    because you are now,
    untrusted'

    Nice poem,10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Malini Kadir (6/18/2009 8:26:00 AM)

    really nice child......you have written with a maturity far beyond.....keep going
    It is passion that gives trust.....actions that reign forces it....keep it up! (Report) Reply

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