Try To Love Again Poem by Laurie hill

Try To Love Again

Rating: 5.0


The dreams you have and will not share,
This reticence of trust.
The hurt that's still within your heart,
denies a love that's just.
Your fantasy of lover's ploys,
a distortion of my reason.
Your mistrust of love, for lust.
The man, mistook, for treason.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
T S 19 February 2010

This could have been wrote for me.... Once trust has been broken it takes a long time for things to mend and make sense but they do with time, , , , Yes I know you told me so

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Yes Lauie, it is hard for some to trust again Walls are put up to stop the hurt inside. This is such a sensitive poem. Thank you for sharing. 10 Karin Anderson

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T S 27 May 2009

As Jasmin said, Trust....so easy to gain and much more easier to break, We may fall victim once, but not a second time as we are on guard letting no one in, and possibly missing the chance to accept real love. Superb poem

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Tia Maria 07 February 2009

Sad how broken hearts mistrust. Excellent poem Laurie 10/10

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Shirley Anne Alexander 07 February 2009

I like the way the lines play together. Nice.

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