Tum Jis Din Gye... Poem by abhilasha bhatt

Tum Jis Din Gye...

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Tum jis din gye sheher chod kar…
Sheher bezar sa mere lie hogya
Main bhi chl pada naye sheher main tere sheher ko chod kar….
Jahan tum nhi thi ab…
Wahan kaise reh sakta tha main ab…
Yadoon ka ek daricha tha jahan…
Tumhare sath ghar thi is beghar anath ka jahan…
Tumhare jane par tera sath chuta…
Tum Kya gai us sheher ne bhi sath hamara choda…
Tume kitne pasand phool sonjuhi k…
Aj jis sheher main hoon ghr hai kiraye ka…
Jb tk kiraya hai ye mera hai…
Jb nhi to tumhari tarh ye bhi sath chod jaega…
Ek angan hai yahan thoda choda thoda bada sa..
Sonjuhi k phool lagaye hain agan main maine..
Tumhe yaad karta hoon…
Tumhari baatain inse kiya karta hoon..
Tum anjan hokar bhi aziz ho inke lie…
Tumhari tasvir jo main banaya karta tha..
Tumhe dil se canvas par rango se dil k utara karta tha…
Tumhe ye sab befazul lagta tha..
Magar ye mere zindagi main rang bharne ka kam kia karta tha…
Tumhe meri ye bat nasamjhi lagi…
Uske bad meri har bat tumhe bematlb lgi…
Tumhara milna kyun km hogya..
Mujhe samajh main nhi aya..
Seher se din se shaam se raat ye silsila kitne mahino tk tumhare intzaar main kata tumhe samajh main jane na jane ayega…
Keh deti tum mujhse..
Sath na depaogi umebhar..
Main chla jata bandh k tere yaadon ka saman lie nai dagar…
Main ab bhi teri tasveere hi banata hoon..
Chota hi sahi naam hogya hai mera bhi chitrakaron k is sheher main…
Ab bhi tumse hi jeeta hoon…
Ab bhi tumko hi jeeta hoon..
Ab bhi anken kholne k baad tumko hi dekhta hoon..
Ab bhi ankhen band karne se pehle tumko hi dekhta hoon..
Janta hoon pagal kahogi tum mujhe..
Han maine pagal hoon ab bhi pyar main tere nhi bhool sakta tumhe..
Kbhi koshish hi nhi ki kbhi bhi bhoolne ki tumhe….

Monday, November 30, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 05 January 2017

Wow.... Kind of a philosophical monologue unraveling various conflicts and situations arising out of human relationships. The poem also tries to explore the pros and cons of these situations. I am amazed at the range of your imagination and the language employed to bring out the exact expression. Thanks a lot, Abhilasha ji. Sonjuhi k phool lagaye hain agan main maine.. Tumhe yaad karta hoon… Tumhari baatain inse kiya karta hoon.. nhi bhool sakta tumhe.. Kbhi koshish hi nhi ki kbhi bhi bhoolne ki tumhe….

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Akhtar Jawad 28 February 2016

Han maine pagal hoon ab bhi pyar main tere nhi bhool sakta tumhe.. Kbhi koshish hi nhi ki kbhi bhi bhoolne ki tumhe…. Firaq Gorakhpuri says Ek muddat se teri yad bhi aai na hamein Aur humbhool gaye hon tumhein aisa bhi nahin.

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