Tune Of Fatality Poem by sam naser

Tune Of Fatality

Rating: 4.0


i dont know anything.
im cold confused and scared.
walking aimlessly through
the dark
crying and humming hymns
to myself knowing i
cannot hear past the
ravenous wind
watching me through the
bushes
not attempting to hide
well
i know nothing of this moment
but that i hymn your tune
you in the bushes
i hymn your tune...
give me one kiss
then kill me
give me one soft
pillow kiss
then kill me
again and
again
and again
until you know i am in
this trance that we
call love

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Zack Burton 27 February 2010

Scarily similar to one of the poems I have in my notebook, which uses the lines 'Kiss me, cutie / Kill me, cutie.' Very good. I like the cold, ominous imagery.

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