The gathering turns out to be great show
The ladies put on jeweler and glow
The show is perfect and impression is made
The host is happy to have boosted enough about trade
Here takes place unruly scene too
Many relatives try for points to prove
Many patch up differences
Ask for apology and behave well at once
This is the only place where everybody attends
The wedding cards with lavish appearance are sent
This is the occasion where everybody remains present
The occasion is graced and no one remains absent
Even thought it is more on grand show off
The family tradition has been made last laugh
You can see great many changes with no participation
It is just gathering with no love and affection
I hope it may turn for good in future
We need to develop mixing nature
A place for meeting old people
Elders, sisters and newly wed couples
Spelling errors make it difficult to read. Debi Bartley14 minutes ago No flow. Comment 1 Comment0 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago please mention too so i correct it
: Turn for good (Score: 1) by manofyhwh on Saturday, March 01,2014 (00: 18: 20) It is rare that I comment on something I've read, although I read a lot. Something compelled me to let you knwo that you have hit the nail right on the head. Very Happy
xLike 20 minutes ago by Alex Taranto | Reply Alex Taranto Love the flow of this. Tfs :) 19 minutes ago by Alex Taranto | Reply
Alex Taranto xLove the flow of this. Tfs :) 19 minutes ago by Alex Taranto | Reply
Ginger Blue xLike 18 minutes ago by Ginger Blue | Reply
True Gabriela Passmore15 minutes ago That's exactly what a wedding is like. Comment 0
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The gathering turns out to be great show The ladies put on jeweler and glow