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Twenty-One

A Birthday cake for you,
A Slice of Chocolate Heaven,
It may be too sweet for you,
That's why it's a fake one.

Today you get your keys
Can open many doors,
Watch out for cheeky monkeys,
That hide behind the doors.
Sometimes you get donkeys,
You better slam the doors!
If it is a wolly wookie,
Dash quickly out the doors!
If it turns out Chucky,
You better lock the doors!

I hope that you are lucky,
Waiting behind the doors,
If that is your destiny,
He will find you and be yours.

Happy Birthday Dear!

Submitted: Wednesday, September 12, 2012
Edited: Wednesday, September 12, 2012


Poet's Notes about The Poem

My daughter turns 21 today and this is my birthday poem for her.

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  • Philo Yan (9/12/2012 8:21:00 AM)

    To view the slice of chocolate heaven, please go to:

    https: //picasaweb.google.com/115604348708138178965/MyArtCorner2012#5780124290782595186

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