Twenty Years From This Day Poem by Lynn Grassette

Twenty Years From This Day

Rating: 5.0


Twenty years from this day
When we've gone separate ways
When all is grown, all has changed
And time causes feelings to fade

I hope to see you on the street
With a lover who you complete
May she laugh and love as much as me
With heat so pure and soul so free

I hope we smile, give a sigh
Exchange greeting and goodbyes
And if we happen to meet eyes
Think 'Those were the days of our lives'

And if you cry for me that night
Though holding your lover tight
Just know all is all right
For we loved, with a love
Well worth our time

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Francesca Johnson 26 January 2007

A sad read in some ways, Linley. Anticipating a parting of the ways in 20 years' time? How can you be sure? Love, Fran xx

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Jon Lloyd 31 January 2007

Fabulous, Linley. wonderfully wistful, but with recognition that it's 'better to have loved and lost...) Jxxx

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Alison Cassidy 11 March 2007

It's a fascinating thought - twenty years from now... scarey too! Your compassion and tolerance shine through this piece about forgiveness. Thanks for sharing. love, Allie xxxx

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Jerry Hughes 04 March 2007

...twenty years from now I'll be posthumous Lin, but I'll leave you my pen

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Brian Dorn 01 February 2007

Amazing write, Linley... heartfelt but not overly sentimental. Really well done! ! Brian

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Original Unknown Girl 01 February 2007

This is so bitter-sweet Linley, great write though and like the feeling of hope and knowledge that love WAS there.... it probably still is! HG: -) xx

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jim hogg 31 January 2007

There's great sadness in this, but there also seems to be a resigned determination that it will end up this way, plus a generosity of spirit. There will be cause for that. Good quality writing throughout.

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