Fiona Davidson

Rookie - 27 Points (From beyond time)

Twilight Zone - Poem by Fiona Davidson

Orbs of light floating on walls
Creaking doors and windows
That sound of footsteps on stairs
Stealthily creeping upwards
Handprints on glass outside
Unexplained two floors up
Icy blasts of air follow us
As we walk through the darkness
Candles flickering drawing us
Towards that eerie cellar
The figure that beckons us
To join them in the garden
Unearthly laughter goading
As we shiver in the twilight
These things are so delicious


Comments about Twilight Zone by Fiona Davidson

  • Rookie - 67 Points Premila Patel (5/30/2015 7:47:00 AM)

    Just one more... I wonder who take the most pleasure from it all? ? xx Your poetry makes my mind linger and linger.. diversifying into more and more things... xx (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 67 Points Premila Patel (5/16/2015 9:41:00 AM)

    I would have gone for its delirious, or ironic or even typical but describing it as delicious you certainly have a craving perspective! ! ! xx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Giselle Joseph (7/23/2009 4:43:00 PM)

    Another well written piece of work Fina 10+. Oh let me take the time to inform you and all others that you haven't read much work from me lately due to two break in at my home and my laptop and desktop were both stolen. Am on vacation now visiting family in the U.S so they allowed me to use their laptop until (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sue Sie (7/23/2009 4:36:00 PM)

    Woooo scarey stuff....reading this from behind a cushion lol...arghhh turn the
    light on....10
    Sue (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points . . (7/23/2009 4:27:00 PM)

    These are a few of my favorite things... :) Terrific write Fiona! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 23, 2009



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