Two Worlds Poem by Atara Gedalowitz

Two Worlds

Rating: 4.8


Enter here
And feel the fear
Of desperate dismal dismay
Of those who wish to be free
From their bondage night and day

Enter here
And see those dear
To mountains of great power
Those in this place, feel no need to chase
The place of those who cower

Enter here
And you will peer
At a world that is quite queer
Where those with much are out of touch
From those who need their ear

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 20 June 2008

I almost gave this a 10 but I examined it closely and came up with a 9. I want to say though, that this young girl is going to be a great poet someday. She is better than 80% of the poets here right now if this poem is an indication. I'll read another and see, but I feel confident in my statement. GW62

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