Desperte
No temprano
Vi
Mosquito
Pico
Sangre en la barbilla
Sobre la pared
Arana
Vuelve atras
Espejo
En frente de
Chasquido
Hervi
Agua del pozo
Burbujo
Ahmad, it's impressive that you're multilingual, but do you realize that many of us are not?
sorry I dont know spanish you should put the poem in english also thanks
Briefly and concisely writing - you wrote the cool poem. I like it. Greetings. :) Maria Barbara Korynt
Sorry Ahmad...I do not know Spanish either...as Eyan says an English version would be helpful
Well it is so different as we used to write in Spanish but it is good. Keep writing.... :)
Una estructura tipo haiku múltiple en Español. Interesante planteamiento. Sigue trabajando! Saludos, Dragon Wizard
buen poema amigo poeta, me gustó mucho las imagenes que proyecta el poema keep at the good work
The Castle in the Sky...Un tragico castillo en el cielo, un lugar donde no quisiera encontrarme. El poema parece enmascarar la triste realida de la vida. El espejo refleja lo que quieres ver- en el trasfondo; quebrantado! An interesting write.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Please forgive me I do not know the language........ Yet I understand these pertains to something related to mosquito from the comments. Kindly translate it to English so that I can share you the moments of happiness.