Uncombed Memoirs Poem by devika isabella pathu

Uncombed Memoirs

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I traveled on uncombed reminiscences
for ever and a day
it rains with the sun silent out.
We had wrecked our ship
by steering it into an island,
far down on the verge of earth.

We walked away
Leaving it bleeding
As the woods were on fire,
All we had left was a lost rain

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 18 October 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Devika. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Devika Isabella Pathu 21 April 2013

thank you Lu corner and tiku for your read and comments. thanks again devika

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Anil Kumar Panda 20 April 2013

very nice.a philosophical drop.liked it.

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