Treasure Island

Bob Flake

(On the floor)



Thought of less due to different actions.
Different actions due to mental conditions.
Mental conditions due to farting.
Farting due to my mamas home made chili.

God didn't do this.

Mom did.

Submitted: Monday, November 03, 2008
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  • Mathew Sutter (11/3/2008 9:06:00 PM)

    Hello BOB! I would like to agree with Kacey first on respecting another poets writing. One of which you seem to lack btw. You do NOT go around and put ppl down. The point of this website is to make ppl known and for other people to appreciate the finer arts of writting. I feel utmost pitty for you even though i'm sure kacey wouldn't even spit in your direction HA! Your points are mute and megor. I myself have won several awards by my poetry which I think is a grand achievment in my life, better than what you have set up! The have a point but you do not have the potential that makes a poet. I'm not srry to tell you this and I do hope your life is as wounderful as you poems! =) (Report) Reply

  • Kacey Hauck (11/3/2008 8:24:00 PM)

    honestly. i dont really see how u can criticize my poetry when urs is so juvenile.
    but as a poet. i respect ur poetry. as for respecting you. not so much.
    have a nice day(: (Report) Reply

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