Undying Love. Poem by Sandra Feldman

Undying Love.

Rating: 5.0


The Moon
Is not as far
As you
Are now from me.

We lost track
Of each other
And of that
Love,
That was not
Supposed to be.

But you're still
Alive, in me
Like the life giving
Fluid, that runs
In every Tree,
Alive!
Like this Love,
That was not
Supposed to be
But that now
Even runs deeper,
Than the life
That's left in me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LeeAnn Azzopardi 08 February 2023

this poem has made me weep Top 5

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Sandra Feldman 09 February 2023

Not my intention to make you sad. I certainly appreciate your heartfelt words.

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Sandra Feldman 10 February 2023

Deeply shared! Appreciate your tender feelings very much! Thank you.

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Jayne Louise Davies 08 February 2023

Lovely write Sandra x Top marks*****

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 February 2023

' Like the life giving fluid that runs in every tree'. Beautiful line from a beautiful poem. To my favorites.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 February 2023

The opening lines are very captivating . They grip the heart to feel what's in the heart of the wonderful Poetess.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 February 2023

A poem of love of great depth. So beautiful and heartfelt. Very touching lines that penetrate gently to the core of being.

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Nosheen Irfan 10 February 2023

Love stays alive, though unfulfilled. Beautifully articulated feeling of deep love.

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Sandra Feldman 10 February 2023

Your lovely words for this poem, dear Nosheen are the true conception of this poem's being. Thank you so much!

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Sandra Feldman 09 February 2023

Dear Susan, such incomparable words for so little. Poem and I thank you with all our affection and heart..

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