Unlucky Poem by Sander Shelnutt

Unlucky

Rating: 4.3


I compare life with the behaviour of a rollercoaster,
It has its ups and downs,
But my rollercoaster seems to be that sort of rollercoaster,
that stays underground...

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Khairul Ahsan 01 August 2013

Underground roller coaster...a new idea. You have expressed your state of mind so successfully with this short poem, well done! Why there is an 'an' before the word rollercoaster, I wonder.

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