Treasure Island

Sander Shelnutt


Unlucky


I compare life with the behaviour of a rollercoaster,
It has its ups and downs,
But my rollercoaster seems to be that sort of rollercoaster,
that stays underground...

Submitted: Thursday, August 01, 2013
Edited: Thursday, August 01, 2013

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  • Khairul Ahsan (8/1/2013 5:45:00 AM)

    Underground roller coaster...a new idea.
    You have expressed your state of mind so successfully with this short poem, well done!
    Why there is an 'an' before the word rollercoaster, I wonder. (Report) Reply

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