Until It Starts Again Poem by Miranda Van Yperen

You so eloquently described the ups and downs of friendship. This poem took me back to when I was in school where my best friend and I used to always fight and then make up. It brings back a lot of memories. Thanks for taking me on that journey. And thanks for your feedback on my poem. X

we hug I'm happy she's happy too once again friends surviving the crash untill it starts again romantic poem..written well..what is loveable here is your fight for love shows the depth and fairness of love..great job you are doing indeed..and I really enjoy your poetry ltile girl..best of luck and much much wishes and regards..love poetess..10/10

Good clear communication which lays out the events and gives a narration of the fight like a marker through a time scale. There is passion, there is anger, through our own thoughts and memory s which can relate to these few words. To ever be specific you will have to put meat on the bones to, when, why, how and where. If you can achieve this much with so few words, a full poem will be devastating.

Miranda, you did an excellent job of describing the cycle of fighting then kissing and making up. I can picture this well in my mind. Wouldn't it be wonderful if the couple could just hug when they're angry and express their anger through love? Ahh, human nature is such as you so well described! ! !