Untitled Poem by Emma Alberts

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Sitting on a door step
Waiting for you
Tears straining from my eyes
Falling with the rain
Sitting on a doorstep
Wondering if you'll ever come
Running 'round that block again

P.S. Please don't have these comments asking what this means... CUZ I DONT KNOW EITHER! lol

(Fall 2008, Age 11 (still almost 12!) , Door County, Wisconsin)

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Dee Daffodil 04 September 2008

You leave the reader wondering...who? ? Who are you in this poem...a dog...cat..little girl...woman...mother...wife...? ? ? Who is it that would come running? ? (see all of the above...LOL) Poems that leave the reader wondering are very creative! Hugs, Dee

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