Untitled Poem by Nosheen Irfan

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Love is not a flicker
to be blown out by the wind
nor a fire to engulf
and destroy you
True love be a quiet river
just flowing and flowing
without a thought
never changing path

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Thursday, December 20, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nadeem Ishaque 13 March 2019

There is a meaning inherent in the metaphor of this poem that’s worth pointing out: one never steps into the same river twice (Heraclitus) . The quiet river flows steadily, never changing path, but the water (its content) is always fresh. And so is true love.

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Unnikrishnan E S 20 December 2018

Love is a lovely 😊 river that flows forever, a spring that flowers round the year. Very true.

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Anil Kumar Panda 20 December 2018

That is true. True love is divine and pure and flows like a river. Beautiful composition. Thanks for sharing.

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Nosheen Irfan 20 December 2018

Glad u like it. Many thanks.

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Lahore, Pakistan
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