day u left me alone my teacher says:
water kill fire, we know it for sure
and tear is water with some elements more
but my heart is burning although i do cry
so my ignorant teacher stop telling lie
Wow. It seems every poem of your I read, I like more than the one befire. This on is excellent... love it.
If I were your teacher.., he left you because he would be ignorant and worthless. sensible soul and writing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Another good example of properly written poetry . I recommend it . Short and direct and concise. GW62