merna ibrahim


*utopia* - Poem by merna ibrahim

Utopia is a place where you can find pure air
A place where everyone is kind, polite and fair
A place where there are Angels flying everywhere
A place where there is neither sadness nor despair.

In Utopia unique humans are not so rare
They all love each other and for emotions care
No envy, lying or hypocrisy - I swear
Everything and everyone's ideal I'm aware

I really really wish I really could be there
But going to Utopia's a big affair.

This poem is revised by the great poet'John Knight'


Comments about *utopia* by merna ibrahim

  • Silver Star - 3,325 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (3/14/2014 7:58:00 AM)

    So did u write this wondrful utopian poem? If people chose other means than violence then this utopia cud be real. Lovely rhymin.
    I hope u read my latest poem too. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 21,269 Points Mohammad Skati (2/13/2013 9:50:00 PM)

    HI, MERNA.IT'S A GREAT POEM, BUT TRY TO BE MORE POETIC.THANKS. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Rakesh Rampariya (8/12/2012 5:51:00 PM)

    hope you will be there early (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mariam Amr (11/12/2010 11:27:00 AM)

    I think utopia is the best place for you.I think that you need angels to deal with, we really need an ideal society as in utopia. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 27 Points R. H. Peat (7/5/2010 2:44:00 AM)

    Oh I know why utopia isn't there
    It can never be found anywhere
    With all those differences to bare
    it's known that utopia wouldn't dare.

    And that's utopia's little snare
    there's too much hate for prayer,
    and that's why utopia's so rare;
    that's why utopia is nowhere.

    a poet friend
    RH Peat (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Zeinab Sherif (2/5/2010 4:27:00 AM)

    bravo! it is veeeeeeerrrryyyyyyyyyy.......very....very..oh my god i don't know what 2 say it is a very digestive poem i used the word digestive 2 prepare myself for the biology next term.nice, nice, nice.it is simple meaningful wonderful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Farah Aliah (1/30/2010 12:10:00 AM)

    So cute...I hope the whole world is like that
    100.............................................++++++++++++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Philosophy of a DewyFlower (1/25/2010 10:54:00 AM)

    so lovely land, I can see it, it's not far it's in my mind, in the mind of each reader too! ! !
    I like it so much
    Thanks For Sharing Sister! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Chitra - (1/13/2010 10:11:00 PM)

    thanks Merna for opening the gates to Utopia! !
    And you in a way have made us realise that PH is our online Utopia! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Dr Hitesh Sheth (1/13/2010 10:40:00 AM)

    Utopia is the place where Merna gets Nobel Prize
    Utopia is the place where Merna is a leader of Wise.....a good write... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie HaZeM PaKKaR (1/12/2010 9:14:00 AM)

    amazing! ! ..

    in Utopia, i can read such a soft & tender poem..
    anywhere on the earth could be a Utopia, if we keep dreamig about it..
    also, poetry will help reach there..
    good imagination is speaking through your lines, Merna..

    thanks4sharing! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 14 Points Ravi Sathasivam (1/12/2010 1:22:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem.
    A very well penned.
    I wish to find a beautiful land like the one you have described here
    Lovely piece.
    Enjoyed reading it
    Thanks for sharing with me (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Omar Ibrahim (1/11/2010 1:42:00 PM)

    it's not difficult for angels like you to go to utopia....specially if they can write like this wonderful poem....nice rhyme too....(aywa ba2a ya merna) : D (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,773 Points Marieta Maglas (1/11/2010 10:13:00 AM)

    I really really wish I really could be there

    wonderful surrealistic poem

    10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 13 Points Reem Ehab (1/11/2010 9:57:00 AM)

    Really.. great one, Ryhme is fanatstic, and I wish really there was a place like this ever existed.10++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mohammed Hassan (1/11/2010 5:01:00 AM)

    that is so impressing
    you make me want to be there in that wonderful island
    i'm sure that Plato didn't know what will be in our century
    i'm and if so, he couldn't ever think about it hehe, it's out of reach
    keep it up Merna you are a great poetess
    10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 53,791 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/10/2010 9:38:00 PM)

    To be in utopian land is not fair
    You may have all means with free air
    It is like climbing to sky on stair
    Are you sure of going there?

    No sadness or to say no despair is not fair
    Until we pollute, it is always pure air
    As human being, you should always have envy
    Hypocrisy and jealousy always carry

    Utopian land is free for all

    Utopia is a place where you can find pure air
    A place where everyone is kind, polite and fair...............i feel you want to run away from real world...there is no joy if they are missing from us...lovely poem Merna...Good luckto you..find my response as under: - lovely 10 too
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    To be in utopian land is not fair
    You may have all means with free air
    It is like climbing to sky on stair
    Are you sure of going there?

    No sadness or to say no despair is not fair
    Until we pollute, it is always pure air
    As human being, you should always have envy
    Hypocrisy and jealousy always carry

    Utopian land is free for all
    You can find place with simple call
    As dreamer you can always visit
    Angles may take you there if you insist

    Ride on wings with high ideals
    Everything bad here is for the real
    You may not digest if there is complete peace
    I wish you there to live with ease

    enjoy it..it is for u..reply (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Afzal Shauq (1/10/2010 9:14:00 PM)

    I really really wish I really could be there
    But going to Utopia's a big affair.

    This poem is revised by the great poet'John Knight'

    wow sweet poem about utopia..really what you said here is true and heart feeling..the idea has penned professionally and the expression as a whole is very poetic and soul touching..a good and inspiring task... well done merna..10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 139 Points Romeo Della Valle (1/10/2010 8:41:00 PM)

    A very well penned piece you got here, I wish also to find a paradise island like the one you described...I would be very happy, too...Keep it up! 10+++(Sorry the rating vote is not going through in my computer...I complained to the site, not answer yet...) Love and Peace... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,692 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (1/10/2010 8:37:00 PM)

    A powerful painting of peace. Well done my friend. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 10, 2010

Poem Edited: Sunday, January 10, 2010


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