*** Vain Pigeon *** - Poem by ANJALI SINHA

A Pigeon preening
pinions most of the time-
Obsess with body.

Dove with clean body
pink legs, green necks perches
on Beauty Parlor

A vain dove flies from
terrace and perches on same site-
Seeks attention



Comments about *** Vain Pigeon *** by ANJALI SINHA

  • Rookie - 114 Points Aijaz Asif (6/3/2009 12:31:00 AM)

    A vain dove flies from
    terrace and perches on same site-
    Seeks attention..... :)

    it sounded alot like? ? ? ? ......a very beautiful and touching write which i felt and can relate to myself...thanks many 10'sssss like always

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  • Rookie Tulsi Hanumanthu (12/23/2008 1:39:00 AM)

    Well crafted senryu sequence on Vanity (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Chitra - (12/15/2008 10:21:00 AM)

    a different theme handled in contrast to the others
    but still it has come with panache (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Min Sia (12/15/2008 7:44:00 AM)

    A superb observation..into a great composition!

    You really are a great poet! Superb! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ajith Patnaik (12/12/2008 3:09:00 AM)

    u really make me close my mouth. WONDERFUL! ! ! i'll always go thru ur poems (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sarvesh Kulkarni (12/4/2008 11:09:00 AM)

    three different ideologies.....wonderfully put forth.
    gr8 analogy.
    thank you friend. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Stacey Watts (12/3/2008 10:27:00 AM)

    I loved this poem. It made me giggle I am not sure why because I just could picture it. So many people do this same sort of thing. They are full of vanity. Excellent piece. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Blue Eyes (12/2/2008 9:34:00 PM)

    this must have been a change for u to write this poem.i love it, but it seems like cheerful somehow. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,756 Points C. P. Sharma (12/2/2008 8:23:00 AM)

    How sweet a song from the sweet sweet dove but untouched by vanity.
    CP (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kite Remedy (12/1/2008 10:29:00 PM)

    that's a niece piece..
    I love it since i love anything with wings..
    great poems with no doubt.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Dr Kamran Haider (12/1/2008 1:23:00 PM)

    Hmmm I got what you wanted to say through this poem... Hmmmm.. You didn't share it with me... Still I noticed and loved it... Really different from your previous ones...10 +++ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 30, 2008

Poem Edited: Monday, December 22, 2008

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