*** Vain Pigeon *** Poem by ANJALI SINHA

*** Vain Pigeon ***

Rating: 3.4


A Pigeon preening
pinions most of the time-
Obsess with body.

Dove with clean body
pink legs, green necks perches
on Beauty Parlor

A vain dove flies from
terrace and perches on same site-
Seeks attention

ANJALI SINHA

30-11-2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Kamran Haider 01 December 2008

Hmmm I got what you wanted to say through this poem... Hmmmm.. You didn't share it with me... Still I noticed and loved it... Really different from your previous ones...10 +++

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Kite Remedy 01 December 2008

that's a niece piece.. I love it since i love anything with wings.. great poems with no doubt..

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C. P. Sharma 02 December 2008

How sweet a song from the sweet sweet dove but untouched by vanity. CP

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Blue Eyes 02 December 2008

this must have been a change for u to write this poem.i love it, but it seems like cheerful somehow.

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Stacey Watts 03 December 2008

I loved this poem. It made me giggle I am not sure why because I just could picture it. So many people do this same sort of thing. They are full of vanity. Excellent piece.

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Aijaz Asif 03 June 2009

A vain dove flies from terrace and perches on same site- Seeks attention..... :) it sounded alot like? ? ? ? ......a very beautiful and touching write which i felt and can relate to myself...thanks many 10'sssss like always rgds asif

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Tulsi Hanumanthu 23 December 2008

Well crafted senryu sequence on Vanity

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Chitra - 15 December 2008

a different theme handled in contrast to the others but still it has come with panache

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Min Sia 15 December 2008

A superb observation..into a great composition! You really are a great poet! Superb!

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Ajith Patnaik 12 December 2008

u really make me close my mouth. WONDERFUL! ! ! i'll always go thru ur poems

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