Ego is climbing
on integrity treading—
wounds in pyramid
at peak in illusive Light
Man's soul withers in Darkness
Because I loved this poem so much, I had to write a poem inspired by a few of my thoughts on the verse, a topic and images which always intrigues me. Many of Mihaela's poems inspire me to write or simply enjoy and for this I thank you :) Soul Lifelong Lesson Transformations Man's soul is a lifelong lesson learning carrying us through transformation of flesh carrying us through transformation of feelings emotions mind stirring evolutions Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Vainglory' by Mihaela Pirjol. Dedicated to Mihaela Pirjol.
absolutely enjoyed your wonderful verse today 'Ego is climbing on integrity treading — wounds in pyramid at peak in illusive Light' yes Man's soul is a lifelong lesson, carrying us through transformation of flesh, carrying us through transformation of feelings emotions mind evolutions :)
How the mighty live in vainglory and how the mighty then fall. Good Tanka
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Truely envisioned. Ego is vainglory and we should be away from this. It is a marvellous tanka I like most.. Thanks for sharing. ....10