Vented Pots Poem by MSL Anuradha

Vented Pots

Rating: 5.0


Wanton sirens and Don Juans
Gad around for new heavens
Lures, sneers true contententment
Like a laughing mirage distant
Yearnings end as yearnings
Loading them in chagrin and pain
In spite of glutting their wants
Linger they like vented pots
Unto death with eternal thirst

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 19 November 2008

a well meaning poem...good flow of words...you have deep insight into your write, Anu...10

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Indira Babbellapati 10 November 2008

there z some wry humour i see in this too as in platonists...

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Joseph Poewhit 07 November 2008

The last line comes across well

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