Vic Poem by Chris Haifley

Vic

Rating: 5.0


Swimming, floating, drifting,
Through and through my mind, the air,
Rising, falling, never ever stopping,
Magnified magnificent in the night.

Trapped in a brisk world,
Without one care, without one worry,
Deceiving reflections, they never quit,
Hope; life, rising, falling, hidden in odd places.
A life filled with nothing,
Worth living; to give hope.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aqeb Benazir 15 August 2011

this carries such a cohesive expression and very sublime meanings to the words...I really like this! 10/10! ! the first stanza has a great touch! 'Magnified magnificent in the night.' nice piece.

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