Victorious Eyes Poem by lily peace lago every by to ph

Victorious Eyes

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Sleepless nights and my thoughts awakened
the languages they spoke better than my friends
and your eyes are the real fishes around
when I am lay abound......

Those are days splendid to say
always remember new thought of waves
your closed eyes and fueled warmth breath
where frugivorous lips entail frozen moment of the peak..

Furrowed you in deep the seeds planted
when fruition in us spread over the eyes
sanguine love attain the sanctum in life
your victorious eyes glistened in joy......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rakesh Bedi 27 October 2009

a nice creation, lago lago.....

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Kesav Easwaran 02 November 2009

'sanguine love attain the sanctum in life'... liked the idea behind this expression...thanks...10

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Lady Grace 31 October 2009

victorious eyes conquers all..

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Sadiqullah Khan 31 October 2009

So much to give to the 'victorious', in love!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 October 2009

Furrowed you in deep the seeds planted when fruition in us spread over the eyes sanguine love attain the sanctum in life your victorious eyes glistened in joy...... wonderful poem to be felt from within...lovely creation and woorth reading it....10 read mine ..anywhere....yes yes yes....butterflies around

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Ency Bearis 29 October 2009

A wonderful innovation in poetic rendition....10

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